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IBT独立写作剖析

文章分类:托福雅思 宣布工夫:2017-7-8 21:00:42

  IBT写作包罗综合写作Integrated Writing和独立写作Independent Writing两个局部。此中综合写作局部是旧托福变革之后新增的局部,对广阔托友们listening, reading, writing三个方面的综合才能提出了更高的要求,按原理说,综合写作局部应该是各人犯愁的关键,实在实践状况却否则,我所打仗的客户有很多多少题目却恰好呈现在对各人绝对熟习的独立写作局部。

  但是我们要抱着Impossible is nothing的信心来面临它!我想李宁这个闻名品牌的告白词用在这里也十分的适宜,Because we shall persist until we succeed!广阔托友们岂非不是如许吗?

  明天我们就一同来剖析一下一位客户的独立写作实例,各人无妨参考自创一下。

  独立写作罕见题目

  (1) 构想工夫太长,打字速率稍慢,不克不及在规则的工夫内完成写作!

  (2) 模版陈迹太重!

  (3) 作文里的GRE陈迹很分明!但凡预备去美国进修的学子们都晓得,除了备考IBT之外,还必需同时备考GRE或许GMAT。而IBT与GRE的写作却大大的差别!后者的逻辑思想更严密,论证的滋味愈加浓厚一些。以是先预备GRE测验的托友们在写IBT作文时就不行防止地呈现上述题目。这一点不容无视!

  Sample composition

  What is the most important animal in your country?

  Animals have a power to become a symbol of a country. Each country has their own animal represent their ethnic and ethics. For example, America represents themselves with the eagle and German represents themselves with the black bear. And in China, however, our national animal is panda.

  Panda is a great source of pride in China. But panda is on the verge of extinction in the world because of people kill them. However, panda is a creature which is appeared hundreds of thousands of years ago. So it is a long and great history and scientists are very interesting with them.

  Another reason that panda becomes an ambassador for China is that it is represented as/ stands for peace and friendship. In ancient time, a flag with a panda on it raise between the two countries is represented as peace, unity and friendship. In modern time, China often sent the panda to the friendly country as a sign of kinship. As we know, China sent the panda to United State and Japan.

  Finally, the history of panda is intertwined with the history of China. In ancient time, emperors used to keep the panda as pets. They thought panda is a magical and mystical animal that can prevent natural disaster. And the lovely panda also can enjoy all the people see them.

  Thus, panda is the symbol of China. Not only it has a long and great history, but also it is represented as/ a symbol of peace and friendship. It is so important to our country that government also concerned about keeping the panda in existence no matter how it will cost. We hope the government will succeed and hope the panda can live on the earth for another hundreds of thousands of years.

  剖析

  (1) W: Animals have a power to become a symbol of a country.

  R: Animals have magical power to become a symbol of a country

  Power的准确运用:

  √Power表现才能、影响力、利用力是不行数名词

  才能:It is beyond/ outside/not within my power. I am not in a position to help you.

  影响力、利用力the ability of controlling over others的相干适用短语:

  Have somebody in one’s power 对或人具有影响力;have power over somebody/ somebody’s fate能决议或人的运气;fall into somebody’s power落入或人的手心中。

  √Power表现膂力、智力,职权、势力时要运用单数方式

  膂力、智力:a woman of impressive intellectual powers智力轶群的女人

  职权、势力(authority):The powers of the police need to be clearly defined.

  (2) W: America represent themselves with the eagle and German represent themselves with the black bear.

  R: America represents themselves with the eagle and German represents themselves with the black bear.

  R: For example, the eagle represents America and the black bear represents German.

  represent的准确运用:

  Represent sth/sb with/ as sth=symbolize sth/ sb with/as sth

  例句:The poet has represents/ symbolizes his lover with a flower.

  表现意味、标记代表的适用短语总结:

  √Stand for

  √be equivalent of somebody/ something

  √be a symbol of something: The lion is the symbol of courage.

  be a symbol for something表现标记、暗号: On maps, a cross is the symbol for the church.

  阐明:由于在这篇文章中反复屡次地运用Represent这个词,这对这位托友的言语多样性表达有肯定的影响,以是以上我罗列了一些它的同义词和同义短语,而且把文章中触及Represent的句子都作了矫正,各人注意一下。

  (3)牢固短语搭配的准确运用

  W: But panda is on the verge of extinction in the world because of people kill them.

  R: But panda is on the verge of extinction in the world because people kill them.

  W: So it is a long and great history and scientists are very interesting with them.

  R: So it is a long and great history and scientists are very interested with them.

  阐明:牢固短语搭配的准确运用无论在口语中照旧写作中都至关紧张!固然文章中也有效得出彩的适用短语,譬如:is intertwined with。它相称于be linked with。

  (4)W: They thought panda is a magica

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