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欧博娱乐点评:I want to try

文章分类:小学 宣布工夫:2012-12-6 21:56:15
点评:I want to try

  My dream is to be a teacher.I will try my best to study ,although my grades isn´ t good.
  I am very interested in English,but I am nervous when the teacher asks me to answer the qustions.My composition always make mistakes on the grammer .I maked a big progess on my PE exam yesterday.So I believe that "Nothing in the world is impossible if you set your mind to do it."Now,I don´t be afraid of lost face.I hope can by this way to write the better compotions."Pratise makes perfect."I should recite some good senters.Whatever I face,I never give up.The rainbow always appear after the rainy.

批 改 老 师:杨教师
评      分:84分
级      别:优秀
评      语:
本文写出了作者的心声,体现出作者积极的心态,是片很不错的习作。但作者对英语的使用还不敷纯熟,文中呈现了用词错误和不妥的题目,语法上一般中央也有题目,这些都需求作者多下工夫,多加联络运用以失掉进步。

My dream is to be a teacher.I will try my best to study ,although my grades aren't(主语“grades”为单数) good.

I am very interested in English,but I am nervous when the teacher asks me to answer the qustions.I always make mistakes in grammer in my compositions.("make mistakes“的主语只能是人,“在什么方面有题目”使用介词“in”).I made great("make“的过来是有误,"progress“是不行数名词) progess in (在测验中使用此介词)my PE exam yesterday.So I believe that "Nothing in the world is impossible if you make(“make one's mind to do sth,“牢固搭配) your mind to do it."Now,I am not (此处不需助动词)afraid of losting(“of”是介词,后应跟动名词) face.I hope I (短少主语)can write better compositions in this way(原句语序不准确,而且介词运用有误,比拟级前通常不需定冠词)."Pratise makes perfect."I should recite some good sentences(拼写有误).Whatever I face,I never give up.The rainbow always appears(主语是双数)after the rain.

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